Just about there.
Screw it, I'm tired of the colored inks. Gonna go with the tried and true blacks for the foreground, colored in the back. Airbrush shade the hell out of it. Hell, throw some tones over 'em, I dunno...
Sigh...why can't I do awesome color like in Always Raining Here...
@AdmiralBetas: You shouldn't worry too much for the coloring. I think your colors are really attractive... if anything, they give your work a special feeling. Others webcomic are so similiar sometimes, your's unique (thanks to the colors too)!
That's my two cents ^^
P.S.: I hope Ryan will stop soon to be so worried about everything and be able to open up brightly with Jay. There are any hope left? XD
@Vilian: Thanks much for the compliments! Actually, I like this version of coloring the best so far; I think it just needs some final tweaks.
P.S. And yes, by the time this chapter is over, Ryan will open up to Jay (at least somewhat).
Unlikely to affect whatever you're doing now but I, too, very much like the watercolour feel of these inks.
@IronDog: Luckily, I kept the style!